Tuesday, April 8, 2008

let us die, let us die

Room. Boy reading script on couch.

Girl approaches.



Girl: Memorizing your lines?
Boy [looking at wall, ceiling, Girl's elbow]: Trying to. [Smiles.]
Girl [frowning] Oh.



Girl exits. Boy looks at wall, frowns, looks back at script.

End scene.

3 comments:

. said...

for some reason i really like this.

and thankyouthankyouthankyou for that compliment. i was sleep-deprived when i wrote those, so it means a lot.

Janie Kamenar said...

don't you tell us about your suffering; look in our eyes..

jesse said...

je leverai les yeux a toi
j'ai change cent foi de nom
je leverai les yeux a toi
je n'ai pas d'espoir



sigh.